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« on: April 09, 2010, 11:01:20 PM »
A lot of things have been going through my mind after a years worth of life changing events. Lately, these things have just overflowed to the point where I can write them down. In the last 2 months I've written a bunch of poems or song lyrics to other songs.

This is the first one I'm going to reveal. It's probably one of the worst things I've written, but tonight I like it. It's about someone who is happy and has a good life, but pretends to be depressed and suicidal. Of coruse there is a bit more, but I can't explain it. It doesn't have a name, either.
Spoiler: Untitled (click to show/hide)

This one has no theme, but the mood is creeply uplifting and happy regardless of the lyrics. It's about the writer, who was abused and harassed by the person who he is writing to, sarcastically writes a letter, thanking the person for making their live miserable.
Spoiler: Thank You Letter (click to show/hide)
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« Reply #1 on: April 14, 2010, 10:59:26 AM »
Very well done, Matty! I can't write poetry well myself, so kudos to you! ^^
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« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 05:32:38 PM »
Quote from: LuigiGirl on April 14, 2010, 10:59:26 AM
I can't write poetry well myself, so kudos to you! ^^

wut

I can write like 3 or 4 a day. .-. I'm sure someone with a excellent writing ability can at least write one every now and then :[
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« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 08:58:28 PM »
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Hello, ladies, look at your man, now back to me, now back at your man, now back to me. Sadly, he isn’t me, but if he stopped using ladies scented body wash and switched to Old Spice, he could smell like he’s me. Look down, back up, where are you? You’re on a boat with the man your man could smell like. What’s in your hand, back at me. I have it, it’s an oyster with two tickets to that thing you love. Look again, the tickets are now diamonds. Anything is possible when your man smells like Old Spice and not a lady. I’m on a horse.

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Everyone does that, including myself. It's human.

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« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 09:01:20 PM »
Quote from: Gameboi Prongs on April 14, 2010, 08:58:28 PM
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Good poetry. With a point. Not acrostic fail.
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« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2010, 09:06:19 PM »
More
Awesome
Then
The
Cool
1
(Times)3

i wanted to make my post as an acrostic, but it was too time consuming and hard. ;-;
also, matt has best poetry.  Except, IS THIS BASED ON SOME TYPE OF LIFE STORY? (No, seriously, that poem seemed pretty deep)
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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2010, 09:48:27 PM »
Quote from: Mashi on April 14, 2010, 09:06:19 PM
(No, seriously, that poem seemed pretty deep)

Yeah, it is in a way.

Anyways, you guys can help me by recommending names for it. Then I can post it on dA :]
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« Reply #7 on: April 14, 2010, 09:56:51 PM »
Instead of dA, you should post it on Live Journal.
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Hello, ladies, look at your man, now back to me, now back at your man, now back to me. Sadly, he isn’t me, but if he stopped using ladies scented body wash and switched to Old Spice, he could smell like he’s me. Look down, back up, where are you? You’re on a boat with the man your man could smell like. What’s in your hand, back at me. I have it, it’s an oyster with two tickets to that thing you love. Look again, the tickets are now diamonds. Anything is possible when your man smells like Old Spice and not a lady. I’m on a horse.

Quote from: Captain Cattus at 8:25, June 28th 2009
Everyone does that, including myself. It's human.

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« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 10:00:25 PM »
Quote from: Gameboi Prongs on April 14, 2010, 09:56:51 PM
Instead of dA, you should post it on Live Journal.

How about no.

EDIT: New poem I'm just posting on NC for now, it will probably go on dA in months, with an extra verse or something. Enjoy my wrath.
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« Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 10:17:40 PM »
Quote from: Gameboi Prongs on April 14, 2010, 09:56:51 PM
Instead of dA, you should post it on Live Journal.
dA got blocked for me, your reminding me of my angst.
Nice writings you got here Matt. :3
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« Reply #10 on: May 31, 2010, 06:20:24 PM »
Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
No, i don't.


=-)
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« Reply #11 on: May 31, 2010, 10:25:54 PM »
Quote from: Pokemon boy on May 31, 2010, 06:20:24 PM
Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
No, i don't.


are you calling my poetry bad?
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« Reply #12 on: May 31, 2010, 11:27:49 PM »
I'm just wondering if Pokemon Boy's post had... any relevant point at all? =/
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« Reply #13 on: June 01, 2010, 09:07:19 PM »
Quote from: Pokemon boy on May 31, 2010, 06:20:24 PM
Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
No, i don't.


=-)

Seriously....wut?

Anyway, nice poems Matt.
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« Reply #14 on: June 04, 2010, 04:58:39 PM »
Quote from: Yohisiboy on June 01, 2010, 09:07:19 PM
Quote from: Pokemon boy on May 31, 2010, 06:20:24 PM
Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
No, i don't.


=-)

Seriously....wut?

Anyway, nice poems Matt.
Sorry i ment

Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
Yes, i don't.


Quote from: MattC13 on May 31, 2010, 10:25:54 PM
Quote from: Pokemon boy on May 31, 2010, 06:20:24 PM
Pwnage has
Over 9000 doers at the moment, This poetry might
Kill you because it is probably bad and i am
Eating Cereal because
Mario is awesome and do
Over 9000000000 people like it?
No, but i do.

But anyways my age is
Over, i mean under 9000. do i have any ancestor who lived over 9000 years ago?
No, i don't.


are you calling my poetry bad?
No.
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